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Friday, August 05, 2011

Meteor Struck

Meteor struck,
Shelter,
Shelter,
From the storm?

A kiss,
With weight,
Of love, lust, and need,

So much at once would break a lesser woman and create a lesser poem. :)
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The poem from which this one reflected
http://poemflesh2.blogspot.com/2011/08/butterfly-girls.html
WEdneSdaY'S cHiLd by Cynthia

4 comments:

Cynthia said...

Oo... yes..."a kiss with weight..."

great response poem, A.

anonant said...

I really enjoy writing in reflection. :)
Keep on keeping on!
peace

Russell CJ Duffy said...

The best kind of kisses.

anonant said...

CJ - Hey mang thnx for the visit.
peace