Meteor struck,
Shelter,
Shelter,
From the storm?
A kiss,
With weight,
Of love, lust, and need,
So much at once would break a lesser woman and create a lesser poem. :)
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The poem from which this one reflected
http://poemflesh2.blogspot.com/2011/08/butterfly-girls.html
WEdneSdaY'S cHiLd by Cynthia
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4 comments:
Oo... yes..."a kiss with weight..."
great response poem, A.
I really enjoy writing in reflection. :)
Keep on keeping on!
peace
The best kind of kisses.
CJ - Hey mang thnx for the visit.
peace
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