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Tuesday, July 11, 2006

To share an angels pain

I awoke to an angel crying
I thought, why
Would an angel undying
Be sitting by my bed crying

I reached out to this angel
I touched a thin delicate hand
To ease what must be
Tremendous anguish

I lost my sight, but I saw
I became deaf, but I heard
I was mute, but for one word
Truth

The source of the world’s pain
Is found in each and everyone of us
Lives spent torn between love and hate
Alone

The angel looked in to my eyes
And began to sing
You are not finished yet
And that is too bad

6 comments:

Ben said...

You described so many things that people would see if they didn't live life with blinders one.

Accolades.

Cheers

Neha Kaushik said...

Hi
very nice use of imagry in your poem. you've portrayed pain so beautifully and uniquely. Keep your thoughts flowing and wish you luck for all your future aspirations.
and ya thanx for making comments on my page.
Take Care
Neha

anonant said...

Nocturnal - Mind-forged manacles, thnx.
Neha - Finishing is the hard part, getting us just right.

Anonymous said...

This is beautiful ~
I enjoyed my visit to your blog.

Satan said...

Ich stehe auf solche Sachen

Satan said...

Es kann nicht genug schweinisch sein